Grade 5 English Module 1 Project Part 2

hello boys and girls hope you are doing well today we will have module 1 project part 2. in our lesson we are going to one write first draft of an email about your day two revise and edit your first draft using arms and cups strategies three write your final draft you will find this listen in your student book page 13 and in your workbook page 9. we are going to follow these writing steps to make your writing easier for you we use these steps to plan organize and complete writing these steps are pre-writing first draft revise edit and final draft the first step of our writing steps is pre-writing the planning stage in this stage you are going to think of your topic brainstorm and organize your ideas let's start brainstorming ideas for our email brainstorming means thinking of different ideas we will brainstorm the most important parts of your email look have so many ideas in my brain don't know which idea should use first so need to organize them to organize my ideas will use this graphic organizer will write down my ideas here so can you help me let's start first need to introduce myself here are some questions and pictures that can help us in writing our ideas let's read and try to answer them what's your name will write my name here sami what school do you go to so this is my second idea doha school what year are you in year 5 that's perfect we filled the first part of our graphic organizer let's continue for the second part we need to think about what do you do in the morning look at the pictures let's start with the first one what do you do in the morning very good wash my face what about the second picture have breakfast excellent and the last one go to school for this part will write about things or activities do after school look at the first picture what do you think do after school excellent study look at the second picture very good ride my bike and the last one watch tv tell me now what do do before bedtime very good read story pray brush my teeth and go to sleep wow you did great job we filled in our graphic organizer now that have plan let's move to our second step write my first draft in this stage we are going to write our first draft write sentences and paragraphs now let's transfer our ideas into sentences let's start with the first idea sami can you put this word in sentence great job my name is sammy look at the second idea doha school can you put it in sentence amazing go to doha school look at the third idea grade five can you put it in sentence wow you are amazing am in grade five can you put now wash my face in sentence great job wash my face look at the second idea let's put it in sentence have my breakfast the last idea go to school want you now to stop the video and try to make full complete sentences using the ideas that are written here let's check your answers study ride my bike with my friends watch tv very good let's do these sentences let's transfer our ideas into sentences read story pray brush my teeth go to sleep this is our first draft think we did very good job we are done with the first objective we wrote our first draft let's move to the second one now we will move to our third step of our writing process revise in this step we are going to read our first draft to make sure it sounds right to you and we will add remove or change words to make our draft better in order to do that we will use the arms strategy this is the arm strategy stands for add words sentences and details remove words sentences you don't need move words or sentences that don't fit substitute substitute means change words or sentences to make your writing better this is our first draft let's read it and try to make it better using revising my name is sami go to doha school am in grade five in the morning wash my face brush my teeth have my breakfast think i'm gonna add some thyme connectives will white then here and after that here then brush my teeth after that have my breakfast and go to school after school study ride my bike with my friend think we can add sometimes here sometimes ride my bike with my friend then watch tv before bedtime read story will change this sentence to always read story before bedtime let's make the sentence better then pray brush my teeth go to sleep will join these sentences using comma and and pray comma brush my teeth and go to sleep did you see how re-read the first draft and made changes to make it even better this is our draft after revising now we will move to the fourth part of our writing steps edit edit means to correct any spelling punctuation and grammar mistakes tenses so make sure to use present simple tense while writing in order to do that we will use the cups strategy so let's find out what cups strategy is stands for capitalize we have to capitalize names places and sentence beginnings stands for usage use the suitable tense when writing use prison simple tense punctuation use punctuation marks spelling check your spelling let's edit our draft my name is sami which letter should be capitalized excellent the in my because it's the first word in my sentence and where am missing punctuation mark yes full stop at the end of the sentence let's continue go to doaha school i'm in grade 5 in the morning no forgot to put coma here in the morning comma wash my face then brush my teeth after that have my breakfast and go to school what word did spell wrong excellent breakfast after school study sometimes ride my bike with my friends rides my bike do you notice something that doesn't seem right to you yeah very good the verb writes it should be right not twice sometimes ride my bike with my friend then watch tv is that question mark no that is not question that is statement sentence so will put full stop here so here is my edited draft it looks and sounds so much better thanks for your help now it's your turn open your workbook page 9 activity 1 read and correct want you to edit these sentences so stop the video and answer the activity let's check your answers great job boys and girls we are done with the second objective let's move to the third one we are in our final step write your final draft write your good copy open your workbook page 9 activity 3 and write your final draft here stop the video and start writing excellent boys and girls you did great job today finally we wrote our final draft we wrote our email excellent boys and girls thank you for watching